Reviews for worthless redux
Ammom chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
This one had a better visual, more emotion and an in depth understanding to what she went through. But I think I like the first one better, if only for the last stanza, claiming her a caterpillar and not a butterfly.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Well i like it. I love how it flows together and theres so much emotion in it. So heart filled. Keep it up!

Kristie Marie
Fading Memories chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Yup, I definitely like this one better. I guess it's more connected, as a whole, you know? The verses fit better and flow better. Beautifully written!