Reviews for Drabble Collection
Gale chapter 5 . 7/12/2008
i think its really great... really.
Gale chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
um... uh, I'm speechless... but hey, nice job..
churkeyrepublic chapter 7 . 2/2/2008
Dani you sound black XD. No racism intended. Funny ending Lillers. Detailed as always.

My reviews are really this short.
churkeyrepublic chapter 4 . 11/20/2007
Ah... 'tis the one Lily spoke of...

It's a cute, peaceful sort of thing... cute.
Muffin chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
(This'll be a 2-in-1 review

4th drabble:

That was quick, I swear. We were just talking and I was still in Baguio and when I got back, I was immediately greeted by a drabble.

I already learned not to underestimate anyone.

Anywho, it was...undoubtedly sweet.

And fluffy, in a peaceful sense..considering the fact that it was in a night-time setting.

5th drabble:

I already read that before.

Same comment.


P.S. Absolutely sorry for the utterly short review. I'm not really in the mood, at the moment.
MacArthur Lies chapter 5 . 11/18/2007
256 and counting. Got too many paper cuts.

Well written. Has some typos but well written. If strangers read this though, the flashback would be...confusing but I think they'd get it after another read.
MacArthur Lies chapter 4 . 11/18/2007
Reminds me of that time you, me and Carmy went to the roof top.

the dialogues confused me. I had to reread it. but all in all, it was a great drabble. adorable, really.
MoFo chapter 5 . 11/18/2007
...okay, your fifth drabble outmatched the fourth one. Wording was nice, and it had a to it. Only thing is that there's a part in the story you pasted twice, I think.

Anyway. I'll go and start folding paper cranes, kthxbai.

- Father
MoFo chapter 4 . 11/18/2007
Heh. Sweet, fluffy. Had a sense of quiet peace to it. So far one of my favorites in your collection of drabbles.
churkeyrepublic chapter 1 . 10/26/2007
predictably cute...
Raya chapter 3 . 10/21/2007
cute... i loved it... but you already know that, dontcha lils? love how you inserted little bits of trivia (btw did you actually research on that?)...anyways...are you gonna ask dani to post the other one? or should someone else write the next seems every drabble has a different author...anyways...keep writing lils...
lalalala chapter 3 . 10/21/2007
cheesy...interesting...all in all its ok...
MacArthur Lies chapter 3 . 10/20/2007
Cheesy but not at all cliche.

Montez chapter 3 . 10/20/2007
Yesh, it is terribly cheesy. But adorably so. XD

I love the facts. *nod*

- Montez
gale chapter 3 . 10/20/2007
i think is really funny... funny romance... i can imagine that it really happened... lily... i really like the story... PENGUINS!
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