Reviews for I Miss You
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
i really like this one. it is really sad though
irritatedgrizzly chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
it's so real. the part "into whatever image would grant her love" is true of so many girls today. maybe not to the point of hurting ourselves physically, but when you think about it, most teenage girls (including myself) change the way they are to fit the people around them.

this poem is great(for lack of a deeper word)the way it is. i was confused at first but i read it over and now i really get it.
A Copper Coin chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Oh this is beautiful. Not in a what she's doing kind of way but rather the style and the way you wrote it is fantastic.

The really sad thing is that girls do change themselves too much for boys and then they feel like they're nothing without them, because the boy is what they have turned into. And it's terrible.

But yeah. This poem was great.