Reviews for Cheater
between the lyrics chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Each word flowed with such passion and emotion. This was truly a great read. It drew me in from the very first sentence and peaked my interest until the very last line. Again, fantastic job. I look forward to reading whatever you may write in the future.
hulha chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
First off, wow. I can feel every emotion she has bottled up. So, he cheated on her, so she said no to when he proposed? I'm just trying to see if I'm following the story right... I'm still not too sure... Either way, that was awesome.
Lavender L. C chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
I love the way you write. I think my mouth was hanging open the whole time. Good work.