That was really cute. Lucky girl.

I would ask, "what, no swooning moments? No declarations of love?"

But I read the summary. So I knew not to expect that

This was very heart-squealing in its own way.

I think it's because your writing is wonderful, and the added factor that this is based on true events.

Did this happen to you?

Or someone you know?

Either way, I'm jealous and happy for whoever it was.

To sum it up, I loved it.

-insert big smiley face-

kthnxbye,

Martin the Waterskier

aww!

Aw, well, congrats to whomever this is based on, it would be s sweet!

Aww. This is so cute and written extremely well for being a short one-shot story. Great job!

i LOVE these stories based on true events. it makes it seem so real and i can imagine these things happening. most of the time, authors would make their characters say things that people NEVER say in real life, and that makes the story so fake and unoriginal. anywho. i thought it was short. and sweet. and it makes me emotional, how he mutters you're perfect and didn't mean for the girl to hear. it makes my heart melt.

short and story!

that was gorgeous

*tear*

it made my day!

thanks! ]]

Mm... bittersweet. Wonderful writing, though. (: Love it! *adds to c2* (:

aww, this was so sweet.

i wish it were longer, though. i'd like to see them tell eachother that they liked eachother or something. that would be adorable!

Thanks for writing this short but very sweet story!

interesting! wished this wasn't a one-shot though. lol. dying to know what will happen. guess i'll just leave it to me imagination then/ good job, mate! XD

This story is good so far, update soon!

this would be good if you showed her reaction.

Loved it.