Reviews for A Treatise on the Social Dynamics of a World
Cicero Williams chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
I must say that I don't get what the title has to do with anything, but it is a brilliant poem. I especially like the stanza about hyperbole.

Question: How is it that you can get your poem to divide into stanzas on FictionPress? It always puts mine in one big, doublespaced blob of text.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
hi rreview button. will you be my friend? no just kidding. i like peanuts too, and squirrels squirels are cute. oh yean and i like your poem because it was about squirrels and peanuts.

and i like the title.
Sahara Hayden chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
Haha. This was very good.
Dollface Dead chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
Haha, deliciously smart and fresh. I like it.