hello,
I just read this now and I was blown writing is beautiful and I am very sorry about the plagiarism. I just wish I could read the whole thing but I'm glad I found you ! Keep writing even if you don't write online. You owe it to writing and your readers and yourself. I strongly believe you could publish a book someday :)

Hey! I would very much like reading all your stories! See you at Plagiarism Heaven!

This is stunning. Absolutely stunning. I would have loved to read the rest, but plagiarism is absolutely despicable and you are right to remove it. Beautiful writing. I'm off to read some more of your stories.

Hello there.

I was browsing through Maeven's favourite stories, and my eye caught sight of this one. I hadn't realised it said removed in the description, so I clicked on it and began to read.

From the first sentence, I knew this was going to be an amazing story. It was just exactly my cup of tea - romantic, descriptive, mythical... I wish plagarism didn't have to happen, because I would have really liked to read the rest of this.

This is by no means a review to make you feel bad in any way, because you shouldn't. It's not your fault other people don't have enough talent and so they have to steal brilliant stories to make up for it.

I was simply dropping by to applaud your talents, to express my sadness at not being able to read - what I am sure - is a fantastic piece of literature, and lastly to say that I back your choice to take your stories down, because I really think you should have the chance to be published one day, and I hope you do.

Sorry for rambling, and thank you,

BlueRoseParamour

Interesting alliterations and I love the sorrow tone this gives off.

People plagiarize things on this site?

That was gorgeous. And I must say, I loved the alliteration. It's by far my favorite literary term :)

I loved it. Amazing, astounding, articulate, an all-time favorite.

-Maggie

wow. beautiful. loved the alliteration, really well done. great contrasts between the characters.

ah, but i love it! :D

wow i really like this ) its very deep and meaningful

i love it. the alliterations were amazing~ :)

I'm speechless.

This was utterly amazing.

How do you do it?

just downright amazing

Wow, I love these alliterations you used, as well as the contrasts of ideas and tastes of the two characters. It's very beautiful, poetic. Awesome!

I love this one shot, it is SO gorgeous. Also, I love that you know so many words to describe colors. Just so you know, you are my favorite author of Fictionpress!

-Chaos