Reviews for Fire and Frost
mlovektowsing chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
I like the alliteration. It perfected the poetic, painstaking plot. :)
Undecided.And.Confused chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
Very colorful. I like it, it like the collision of two worlds. So painful, yet so beautiful together.
jekodama chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
Beautiful. Sweet and short, with lots of imagery, I liked it.
zakei chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
haha yeap i noticed the alliteration. :D pretty cute. very sweet. love it alot.
Linda chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
It's pretty, but over-dramatic. Cute, but done before. Great for teens to read but since you're about my age, maybe you should start writing more realistically. Love some of your stories though
the littlest sakura chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
lol yeah, the alliteration felt a little too forced. descriptive but over the top :P

cute little vignette, albeit not much depth at the moment. do you plan on continuing, or leaving it open to interpretation?
Professional scatterbrain chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Simply beautiful - and Kendal rocks. She's defiantly a good influence to have around in my opinion.
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
It's interesting. I had to check the dictionary about every five seconds (lol) for all the colors, but it's good. (:

(I'm confused, though... are they supposed to be the Sun and the Moon? Or similar celestial beings?)
j4pcurrypwns chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
This was beautiful.

The alliterations and imagery were amazing (:
ess3sandra chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
sweet i say, kendal is one cool chick, as well as yourself and ofcourse myself. i love that in one moment you write this deep well thougt oneshots and in the next a storie that the entire fictionpress forum will love to read, so, what is it really, the funny bit for the joy in life and the deep for the feelings, or just the thoughtafter stories for yourself and the stories for everyone? that is a bit jesuslike or not, P
TwilightSnowStar chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
excellent!
Reiye chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
I like it, the alliteration and repetition of what they say add to the beauty of the story I think. There's only one small thing that bothered me a little, "still some stupid slip-ups", after rereading the story a few times I "stupid" kind of jarred the dreamy quality. But that's almost nothing, so thanks for the one-shot :)
Ashter chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
I love the colors! I know've learned to say red and blue in over twenty different ways ahaha.
simplicity is complex chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
ah lovely, that's all i can say
flojo22811 chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
This is beautiful, I love it.
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