|Reviews for One Crowded Hour|
| meowmie chapter 2 . 1/17/2013
Whoa that was really good! But. I am a littttleee upset by the fact that you took down the story. And that you left nothing on your profile anything about where you might have continued the story or something. But. That's sort of okay...I guess.
| sean.mulhollandsmith chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Really enjoy your stories, I am new to this site so I was disappointed to learn about your stories being removed due to people stealing your work. Wish there was a way to read them somewhere
| marshak chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
You kick ass...long distance high five!
"IT IS MY INTELLECTUAL PROPERTY AND I HAVE
EVERY RIGHT TO DO EXACTLY WHAT I
WANT WITH IT."
| marshak chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
I love how Bastain is such a typical male-like, Not 'cute', and not wanting to hand over his Prescious Remote...then being surprised when Raven not only found the problem but also fixed it For him...totally loved that part, it even made me accidently say "Duuh" out loud.
| greenmayiel10 chapter 2 . 5/3/2012
oh my socks..
this has to be the worst day ever.. T.T
i think this is like the 4th story that i enjoyed reading only to find out that the next chapter was deleted or the whole story deleted.. T.T
oh well i do understand.. but still.. T.T
i like the story.. T.T
| InkedGirl chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Is there anywhere else you plan on posting this? It sounds like such an intriguing story. I'd love to know what happens next
| OneLastEndeavor chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
God, at least have the decency to note in the summary that you've taken this story down so that people don't waste their time. It's people like you who make reading on FP a bad experience.
| DorkExpress chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
Aw... so you maen I'll never get to read the story?
| Electric Monk chapter 2 . 3/6/2011
Anything on the internet in any form can be taken. It's not fictionpress, it's the whole thing: including fancy communities like PH or copy-protected ebooks. But I don't care, do whatever you want with your story.
However most authors that remove their stories from this website have the basic courtesy of noting in the summary that the story is, indeed, removed. So that the people who would otherwise be interested can save their time and effort from wasting it on you. The first chapter was interesting, I clicked to the second only to find you had deliberately stolen my time. That's what bothers me.
| ara07 chapter 2 . 1/21/2011
well, if it isn't too much to ask, can we still read this somewhere then? does that mean you're no longer sharing your stories on the net? or did you transfer it to another sight with more protection against your intellectual property? i hope i'm not coming off as rude and demanding, but i would really like to read this, can you share with us which sight you have it posted? (if you have posted it on another site, that is)
i understand your need to protect your work, but i hope that doesn't stop you from sharing your stories thanks, and good luck on your writing. i think you're really good!
| From Lara chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Hi, I was just wondering, even after all this time, if you we planning on publishing or re-uploading this story. I've only just found it and you mentioned your desire to have this story eventually published. Just wondered if that was still in the books. I'm not a member of this site and don't give out my e-mail address willy-nilly, would it be to much to ask if you felt some sort of reply on this matter, on your profile? I've read other peoples reviews on this story and know that it's a brilliant and unique piece, and I live time travel stories. That snippet you left of your story reeled me in, and I'd love to read the entire story.
I simply wanted to inquire about this story, the first chapter was brilliant. Oh well enough from me.
I'll keep my eye on your profile.
| Freak Of Music chapter 2 . 12/11/2010
wow! i really wish dat i had found dis bok before u had taken it down coz i trully dont have words for dis...im nt sure if dyr r bt ive nvr cum across a story with a plot lyk dis and it does sound very interesting soo even though ive nt read it im gonna put dis in ma fav list coz i kno dis story was, is and will always be a bomb!
| yodagreenman chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Hahahaha I love this! :D ...But it kinda makes me wonder how they'll work. You know, with that obstacle of them being from different centuries I like it!
| swimmer4life chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
My memory of this story is a bit fuzzy, but I still remember that it was really awesome. Sorry for my lack of good vocabulary, but I'm usually at a loss for words when I review really well-written stories. I hope I can reread this if I can be added to PH!
| JustWords chapter 2 . 5/9/2010
WAH! could you at least tell me how the story ended? if they got together or not? that first chapter was brilliant, and i was expecting something along the lines of 'i couldn't stop thinking about you, so i came back' for a second chapter... was that how it ended? or did something happens years and years later? :'( this is going to become an obsession for me, wondering how it happened... just a little habit of mine, and normally it would probably come from someone who was neat, but i'm like the complete opposite... i'm very messy and clumsy and all that...
and i normally don't talk this much in reviews, except for the fact that i had sugar, and its midnight, and... OHBOY! i like your other stories, so maybe i'll just go read those xD