Reviews for Smile be happy
ConverseAllStar chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Good. it sounds a lot like how i feel. at first, from the title, i thought it was going to be a happy poem, and truthfully i was confused to to the content of the rest of your poetry. confused until i read the part about rated for suicide;) i makes sense now.
Orange Muffins chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
I really love this poem. Since I myself can relate to this poem~ The loved the impact you made in this poem~ Really, nice! :D
Aleejay chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
this is very deep, I like it
Zephyr S. R chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
I enjoyed this entry more because of its foothold in reality. There are alot of people, especially in school, who can relate to this work of poetry. 10 out of 10
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Very sad. I've seen the same idea used a lot of times before, but I think you wrote it much better than most people. The beginning was a bit weak, but the ending was very powerful.
TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
OMG i love the imagery u've created...very nice!
Sam chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
That was one of your best poems yet.