|Reviews for When the Wheel Slips|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
| Captain-Dalien chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Wow. This is really good. It demands to be read more than once, just so it can all sink in... I love it. Kudos. CD
| Affinity chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
This is very cool. It sounds a lot like a song to me.. The ending is awesome, nicely done.