Reviews for Jack Olsen: Private Investigator
Jaded Devil chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
I loved it! I think that my favourite part is when Brett told Jack that he liked his student more than him. XD
koerle chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Most short stories over here aren't able to grab my attention really. But this story had no problems with grabbing my full and undivided attention.

Great story. And the final scene was HOT!
Account Disused chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Very good read! Had me laughing quite a bit.

I'm fav-ing this.

Good Job!
alternatearcadia chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
Oh my God this was so good! What a lovable protagonist. Utterly funny. I had a huge smile on my face while reading.
Tinyyellowboxes chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
Amazing!
ThornlessRose chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
There are no words I can say that would do justice to the story.

~Chez~
Cattails chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
I don't know why it took so long for me to read this. I think I didn't realize it was a one-shot...which just shows how slow I can be. *Sigh* But, anyway. I loved it XD It really did kinda remind me of "Never Been Kissed", except even better (which is saying a lot, since I really like that movie :P). I'd go into specifics, but that would take FOREVER. Let's just say, I loved everything about this and laughed a lot throughout. Good job XD
dolly-dear chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Heehee, I love it. Totally Never Been Kissed spinoff, but so so so much better. The awesome sex scene at the end sold me. ]
frolic-horror chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
very cute story. loved it :)
CM chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Although a bit airy here and there, a good read!
sylenctone chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Oh god that was wonderful! Absolutely delightful!

Thanks for writing!
Elkica chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
That was just great, the way you build up the tension, the way you put out the little details of their past (acquaintance) relationship. Even Jack’s transformation into the seventeen year old kid and the fact that Brett didn’t recognized him not even when he saw both versions of the same man believable. The only think that you could loose was a beat of ‘my dick thought’.

I really enjoyed in this story. Thank you for writing it.
Die In A Hole With Penguins chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
I Love This Story. Its Absolutely Great And I Think Its Cool You Were Able To Write This Story In The Amount Of Words You Did- Most People Would Have Had To Make It A Multi Chapter Story.
Little Miss Mania chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Wow! This is great original Slash.
S. Cherise chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
You're an incredible author- I read the interview a while ago (and just reread it) and I wanted to read more of your work- I love the fact that despite this being a one-shot it didn't seem rushed or lack any details or plot development. This has to be the best one shot I've ever read, no exaggeration.
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