Very nice! May have been lovely if it'd been chaptered, but I think you made the right decision. It's quite well developed and satisfying as a one-shot. Overall, very well-written and enjoyable.

I'd have rather seen this on the big screen than 'Never Been Kissed' any day.

Oh, and I wholeheartedly disagree with the criticism about the ending. It followed pretty naturally, in my opinion. The exact sort of ending Jack and Brett needed for their perfect 'happily ever after'. Well done ;)

This would have made a nice long story :( But I didnt really find it that rushed either, I liked it :D Great job!

God! It was BRILLANT! It's so sweet. P

I loved it.

ohmygod. omfg. AMAZING! can I say absolutely AMAZING? I love this story ah! omg, I'm in love!... i'm so happy i can't even think of anything to say except for how amazing this story is. omg. This story makes me really happy :] you did a great job with writing in first person. Not too many people can pull it off very well (even published authors) but this was beautifully done. magnificent job!

Wow I really like this! So cute and sweet

Loved it. So, I read it yesterday but my internet didn't seem to want to let me leave a review so I'm doing it today. Last night, I had a dream and someone mentioned Jack Olsen. i was like: Hey...I read that short story... and they told me it was made into a show...really weird, since I don't usually remember my dreams. but uhh, yeah, glad you finished it and I got to read it.

very nice.

So how someone is meant to find fault with this, I'm not sure! A great read, so glad it was finished and posted and all good things take time (at least that's what they tell me!)

Hello.

I have been devoted to your 'The Not-So-Celibate Life' since it's start although I have, admittedly, never reviewed. So when I stumbled across this little masterpiece purely by chance I eagerly read it, and was not disappointed.

This was a very well-written and a *very* enjoyed story. Could of gone without the sex scene at the end; I feel it sort of doesn't fit in with the rest of the story... somehow.

That being said, the rest was perfect. Well done and thank you.

-Jazz.

Oh this was hysterical and lovely. Wonderful job!

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LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE! I adore this story! It was such an honour to read this masterpiece. It's really well-written and believable (apart from the scary resemblance, as you - or Jack... whatever - mentioned to Never Been Kissed, which I have only had the chance to see about half an hour - if that - of).

I can see why it took so long to write. It was very intricate and deep. (And funny, which helped.) Congratulations on finally reaching the end!