Reviews for The End of Thy Beginning
TheEntertainer26 chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
That made a huge sense of empathy arise within me...what a fantastic poem - you really do have your own unique style, which includes many techniques I have yet to study and it creates such strong imagery through the words you use - I imagine someone walking out of my vision into a thick fog in this one, my hand reaching out to grab them uselessly when I read "I had our entire change - Right in my clutch"...

5 star and then some work from you!

~Ben
Jaded Flux chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
This reminds me of all four of us...