Reviews for The one i want but can't have him in my life
ILveJcb chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
wow, I just saw this...it's so amazingly touching. Are you talking of real things here or is this fictional? Did you really have a crush on a guy who didn't like you back? If yes, I can tell you I know how you feel, because that happened to me years ago and I still can't forget him.

Great one-shot
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Really sweet poem (: Your emotions are clearly portrayed, and it's good that you're trying to get over him. Beautiful writing, simplistic yet touching (:

x mandy
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
That's so sad but it's good that you're trying to get over him.

great poem, it was well written :)
lymli chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
everybody could relate like that, sometimes it's just platonic lav.