Reviews for existentialism
BeRightBack chapter 4 . 3/29/2010
great imagery :) this is totally a masterpiece of words! can i use your poem 'autumn' as the opening of my project? will credit :)
effervescent-sentiments chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
I love this haiku. It paints such a pretty picture in my mind - great use of imagery. It's almost characterization, the pink umbrella and the dirty laces. I can imagine a real human being. Really great.

Jules
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
I like the raindrops-crystals comparison. Nice haiku.
Basara chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
muddy!

nice...
Simultaneous Tick-Tocks chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Hehe. I love rainy days. Cute haiku.

tick-tock
Lemon Sorbet chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
The contrast between 'crystals' and 'dirty-laced shoes' is subtle but beautiful. I don't normally like haikus, but I'm favouriting this.
changed.by.an.afterthought chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
wonderful imagery. this is a great piece in all its simplisity.

- Changed
Princess Narcotic chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
It's very cute and quaint, and I like the modern spin on it. Well done!
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
(: i like it a lot.