There a a few more implications in this than there seems at first glance, aren't there? The title is your penname...and the moon beloved dreams of its sun. CRAZY lovely rhyming.

I've been out of practice reading poetry, but I'm getting it back now and enjoying your poems more and more. I was almost going to leave this to read it tomorrow, but my eyes flashed over it and I knew I had to read it. I love how innocent and amorous you've made the moon. The spacing still bothers me...

I like this alot.

this is a beautiful piece. Simply because it says so little but means so much. The words flow and are oddly (but a good odd)

haunting. Keep it up.

Faith