|Reviews for The Storm|
| Rapture Whispers chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Wow, I loved everything. The imagery, the metaphors...even the fact that it was written in paragraph form rather than in stanzas. You portrayed your emotions excellently. Incredible...for a lack of better words. My mind is officially blown. *applause*
| PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Oh my! This is so sad! The last few lines I just wanted to break out in tears! Great job!
| jupiter lies chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
love it, as I did before. not a helpful critique, but I really like it.