Reviews for Return to Sender
PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Oh wow. That was nothing like I expected. That was so well written. I loved the ending. The last sentence definitely made it, though. Great job!
jupiter lies chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
as always, I like your style, but I find it a bit too vague to be impactful. I really like the strong ending.

I think that being vague, although part of the style, makes it a little too hard to engage with.

otherwise, love the wording.