Reviews for Little book of lies
vanzeeland chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
Wow I love the part that says "In my book of lies you play the villan's part". Very good, and it sounds so good together. I say this a lot but if you gave your poem a structure by separating some lines the reader will be able to follow the poem easily, if that is what you want. The structure will allow the reader to digest the poem evenly, so in the end they will feel satisfied. Great job though and you have very good ideas here )
qblisa chapter 1 . 7/19/2007

HenneyBuggyBand chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
very nice rhythm. very harsh attitude. i kinda like it.