|Reviews for Kinetic Poetry|
| watercolour dreams chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Wow. This was beautiful. I absolutely love your writing. Great story!
| Liya Smith chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
That was so swet. I love you?
| B-Dooliie chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
i love this. its so creative, the way you wrote it. and no grammer mistakes that i could spot! yay!
do you think you'd ever do a full length story based on this? that would be so cool.
| entity.unkown chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
i like your writing. it flows really well :]
| Cynthian chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
ahh. very, very cute. (:
| victoriai434 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
God! your stories are so good!
I love them... this one almost made me cry!
| KarmaC chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
This is a fantastic little one-shot. I absolutely adored the parallel structure. It fit the plot really well.
| beautiful.imperfection chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
| Juliet chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
For some reason this made me want to cry. It was just so honest and...human that it makes you want to cry and never stop. It's so beautiful I can't even put it into words. Amazing job.
| Jainblu chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
this is an assignment?
it's really sweet.
I enjoyed reading it, i loved that the paragraphs reflected eachother.. like in the differences they had there was a kind of similarity.. then the way the final paragraph concluded that was made clear!
Also I hope you're feeling better.
| Ally-Marty chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
This is so pretty! I really like it. :D
| madder red chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
accursed girl..? assignments..? I don't get..
but it was still a great read thought I think you're better at writing longer chapters complete with descriptions, dialogue and what else, somehow minimalism doesn't really suit you o.o but thanks!
| NationChild chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
I like the way you alternated telling each of their stories. That emphasizes how different they are from each other.
| emilybh chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
I like this, its nice.
| strawberry-express chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
This was truly wonderful! I love the ending!