Reviews for Empty One
Octello chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
Woah, dang. That was trippy.
deep cut chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
it doesn't help that i'm alone right now, really

that was spooky... and it's definitely going to my fav list

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l337 r0cX3r chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
Interesting... very very interesting. It well written, and the words paint a great image. The emotions are portrayed very well. Adding it to my favorite stories.

Jessica
Dead Like Samara chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
That was scary.

In a good way.
MoriMcKay chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
Cool beans really. It reminds me of a twilight zone moment...good job.
Dellarose chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
Damn you. I went into the kitchen, right after reading this, and was spooked by a shadow. Not even a threatening shadow! I think it was from the stove. But that's what happens when you write short tid-bits poignantly designed to scare the reader. Well, I'm kidding about the 'damn you' part; the whole menacing stove shadow is true. _ Anyway, it was weird and short, which I believe you were possibly going for, so congratulations and best wishes.