|Reviews for toxic|
| black.pain chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
it sounds so true, but a little choppy
i don't know how to fix it but it sounds uneven and doesn't really flow
| Symphany is lyrical bliss chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
I've felt this way before as well.
It's amazing how someone you love so much can turn out being someone you hate, as well as it is usually amazing to even dream that someone that meant so much could hurt you so bad.
Good use of metaphor throughout the poetry.
| phantom66 chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
that was totally auwsome!
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
This is a much better way to vent than to actually shoot someone or get into a physical or spoken fight. Hey, and you did a good job too! :)
| mynameiswillow chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
i like this one,
i think alot of people can relate to it,