Reviews for A Box of Chocolates
teardropsONroses chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
okay either you switched POVs or switched tenses. it's in the first few sentances...I and then she...

sorry things like that bug me
PersonofthePen chapter 13 . 7/1/2009
That's sweet...

They do make stuffed cats look too real now days. I have one that can pur, seriously. My kitten won't touch it though, yet the dog does, if you can imagine.

Strange how simple things lead to the most complex rewards, too. Great job. You put a lot of work into those stories.
Yellow.Jellow chapter 13 . 5/29/2009
I've really enjoyed reading these stories! You have a really great way with words, kinda jealous actually, ha ha.
Sweet.Linda chapter 28 . 4/11/2009
Omgawd, I adore this !

It's so cute and funny ! xD

Ahah, this is realy good; keep it up ! (:
PotoPerson chapter 31 . 4/6/2009
Excellently written story to top off a clever and excellent series. Box of Chocolates...a lovley series of stories... it shall be missed. Yes, that is an incredibly awesome title. :D

only one thing I noticed

when you said "she was on less, aswered her phone less" you forgot to say what she was on.

Keep on writing!;D
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 7 . 4/5/2009
THOSE *insert swear here* BETCHES! :O

I know how she feels. -_-'

Ah-mazing.

Duh.
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 6 . 4/5/2009
Eip!

So cute!

Loved it!

My gawd, I'm repeating myself!

And is ! starting to annoy you as much as it annoys me?

xoxo;
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 5 . 4/5/2009
I...I think I have actual tears in my eyes...

Wow.

That was sad.

Suh-ad.

I loved it.

xoxo;
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 4 . 4/5/2009
Oh my gawd, are you like stalking me or something?

This girl, the lead character, looks, sounds and acts EXACTLY like me.

I absolutely love this. It's humor, normalness and mystery rolled into one.

xoxo;
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 3 . 4/5/2009
THE CUTENESS IS KILLING ME!

AWH!

ANOTHER awesome one with a sprinkle (ahah, get it?) of cuteness. )

And...

ICE CREAN RULES!
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 2 . 4/5/2009
I guess I love you then!

Another good one.

I want the second part. And am now off to readith more!
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 19 . 4/5/2009
Okay. Wow, must you be this good, like really?

Really?

Ahah, its fun to poke fun! :)

But anyway, loved it, once again.

You really are good at this.

Really.
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 25 . 4/5/2009
For some odd reason, I now want a guy to tell me I smell nice... I'll see to that tomorrow morning at school, then. )

Another ah-mazing one!

Loved it!

xoxo;
Phoenix.Secrets chapter 29 . 4/5/2009
Ehmygawd!

Awhh!

I'm not usually the type to read lovey-dovey stories but this one takes the cake - and eats it too!

I love this, it's so sad! I'm off to read some more in your box of chocolates (and probably review some more).
DeepBluePool chapter 20 . 2/16/2009
...I ask for a sequel. Whether the answer is yes or no, I just want to ask for this particular chapter. If you DO read this, thanks. XD
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