Reviews for Heartbreak
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
konnichi wa

This was absolutely amazing! *adds to favs* I loved loved loved this one! I'm so glad I read it - it describes the feeling perfectly! I haven't had heartbreak in the sense that a boyfriend broke up with me, but I have had it in the sense that someone - or a pet - I loved died. I wrote a poem when one of my pets died, and this is really how I felt. You really captured the feeling with a few, simple words. My stomach is tying itself into knots right now as if I'm feeling the heartbreak all over again. Even though it's a very painful feeling, I think it's absolutely amazing that you made me able to feel this way again after a few months of already having been used to his death. Wow. Kudos.


smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
I love this. I can relate to this one too.

*adds to favs*
EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
As I told you the other night, this poem worked out really really does capture the exact moment you feel your heart rip apart. Great job :)