|Reviews for Loveless One|
| 123454321 chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
"you have other agenda's don't you?"- "agenda's" should not have an apostrophe.
"but it never mattered now did it?"- The "now" in this sentence doesn't fit.
While this type of prose doesn't fit my favorite type of poetry, it fits this topic. The formatting of the piece stunts the flow, but the lists of phrases convey messages well.
| Autumn-Sky0 chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
I really like this, and I really like your choice of words.