Reviews for Jump
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
Wow i loved this, the ending was superb.
Fractured Illusion chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Wow. Just wow. This was very impressive. You described everything in a way that made it easy to picture, and I liked that you chose 1st person POV for this because after reading it, I don't think it could have done the same impact had it been any of hte other two.

Jack is a mighty interesting character I am sad we did not gather any conclusive information about. The math teacher was in a very realistic way adapting to his role as teacher for creative writing.

Well done!
xlilxleex chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
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yes, i like that!

i would love to read more about jack and the girl!

it really grabs my attention and makes me wonder...

how did he get that scar?

what kind of music does he listen to?

keep up the good work!