Reviews for Summer Falling
Sekhmet Johnson chapter 1 . 7/18/2007

I guess God doesn't gossip much, though.

(Ah, but he can do a lot worse than gossip.)

The last line was what defined this poem, I reckon. We've got the first few forbidding lines, and then, BANG! the last line comes along and kicks the sinner in the ass.

I never saw it coming. Kudos!
Exodus.Escence Of Sin chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
very beautiful. i loved the rythm , but seems gloomy. just like me!

lol j/p

your poems are bvery emotional and creative, that's why i luv them so much.

Nimphaiwe chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Very true, no one can hide from Him. Good work. )
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
"Don’t try to validate yourself"

very true. :)