Reviews for The Ceiling
underrose chapter 1 . 3/22/2008

this is...


i loved it.
Patricia Louise chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
hahaha. That's cute!
Nonya Soum chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
This makes me laugh! It reminds me of when the ceiling in my school's gym fell. Varisty volleyball girls screaming, balls rolling and the classic "OMG THE SKY IS FALLING! IT'S THE APOCALYPSE!"

Cleverly written and well placed. It is funny. Great job!

Write on!
Sekhmet Johnson chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
..well, it's true!

This is easily the most insightful poem I've read today. I'm not joking. XD

I salute you, man. Not many people rhyme on fictionpress these days, and even fewer rhyme well, and we could probably count the number of funny ones on one hand..

But, hey, doesn't it feel grand to be one of the number? I love this to bits. It's going on my favourites.
storykeeper chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Yay! My ceiling! The poem still makes me laugh. *should be working*...