Reviews for Picture Perfect
Vigilant chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
You seem to be inspired by tragedy in a way that a lot of people don't write about. It makes your writing somewhat unique, and in turn, interesting. I rarely see the story from the title, well done.

Also, I quite enjoyed the phrase "they had never seen the sadness behind her smile." As I've observed in a number of you writings now, you take things that people often are too preoccupied to note, and point them out.
Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Wow...I liked this one. And I liked the way you bolded the letters to say "Why me" and "she cries". Excellent.
Mrstress chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
I like this poem... sadly enough, it's very true in a lot of situations.

Keep writing!