|Reviews for The Wedding Day|
| Damned to heaven chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
"I'd ask you the same thing but
obviously 'what're you doing here?'
is lying next to you." Best line. Ever. I adore this. The groom sounds beautiful.
| AC is AWESOME chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
It's dripping with cuteness. I want to squeeze the cuteness out of it and pour it into my life.
My only negative comment would be that it feels like the skeleton of a story- there's not a lot of what I'll call 'meat'- description. However, this comes from someone who will prattle on for six pages about a shoe until the reader nods off to sleep. Take the opinion as far as you can throw it. xD
However, you've got strong characters and a lovely little set up for practically anything.
| loves him chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
hahahhaha, I love this so far.
Man, Cami, is hilarious. What a wonderful way to start off your wedding. continue!