|Reviews for Depression|
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
I like this. And I get it. I've felt that way before.
| EyesEmphatic chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
I really like this, mostly because I can relate to that feeling, that little person in the back of your head that tells you you're not good enough, you're wrong, you've fucked it all up again.
Which is kind of what I was trying to get at with 'Darkness'.
Your use of bold and italics really emphasise your point with this. Great job! :)
| Catalan chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
Incredible. You express the torment so well. I especially like , well, I like it all. "contradictory beliefs" . . . depression is illogical but feelings are feelings and have nothing to do with logic. Wonderful poem.