Reviews for Butterfly Watch
Guest chapter 8 . 6/29/2012
The way you described Micholozo's dash to save the crystal prince was beautiful. Nothing else describes it.
SilverSymbol chapter 8 . 3/6/2011
I have been working my way down your list of stories and just had to finally review.

This is a really great idea, and I hope you run with it some more. I hated the idea that you broke up the original three tho, with Raph leaving to Beyond. The first chapter came across as a 3 Musketeers turned to Threesome sort of story.

Ben at least needs to have several lovers, he's such a nymph :P

Please finish his story, everyone else is pretty much paired off.

I have loved everything I've read so far. Thanks :)
alluriel chapter 8 . 7/13/2010
A very interesting world!
shuurai-chan chapter 8 . 1/20/2010
*pout* boo no smut. please update soon.
Kariz chapter 8 . 7/12/2008


T_T I hate myself for loving your stories.
Kariz chapter 6 . 7/12/2008

like your smut very mucch...


and you were really clear with this chapter, so it's unlikely for any misunderstanding..?

Kariz chapter 2 . 7/12/2008
I've moved onto your other stories. I was getting agitated from wondering about the possible future for Cavan and Gair in 'The Black Fox'



Oh jesus this has so much smut potential LOLOL.

I just had a thought, would it disappoint you to see like four(?) reviews overnight and to only find out they're all from the same person?

... D8 I'm just slightly obsessed with you right now, that's a good thing though!
gothicHobbit08 chapter 8 . 7/11/2008
If you get reviews, do we get smut? *innocent smile*
tmelange1 chapter 8 . 6/3/2008
This was a great interlude, though I'm missing Ben.

I hope you'll write more of this one day soon.
tmelange1 chapter 7 . 6/3/2008
This is all very interesting. Very, very interesting... ;)
tmelange1 chapter 6 . 6/3/2008
Very nice interlude, though I'm left wondering who Benvolio is shagging in the hallway while this wonderful scene is taking place. LOL

tmelange1 chapter 4 . 6/3/2008
Man. Whore. LOL

Seriously, though. I so curious as to where all this is going. :)) I wish there was more to this story than what's posted...
tmelange1 chapter 3 . 6/3/2008
I really like Benvolio, though he is a bit of a manwhore. LOL I'm trying to figure out who his significant other is going to be. :))

I'm liking this story way too much, especially since I know it's incomplete with no prospect of being completed. *sigh* The many travails of an original slash fantasy fan...
tmelange1 chapter 2 . 6/3/2008
I love military stories. :)) Soldiers and butterflies are a new mix, however. I think I like. LOL

tmelange1 chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
Very interesting beginning. Bravo!
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