Reviews for My Feathers
Ariel of Wonderland chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
Beautiful job here. I think everybody can related to this, and the choice of metaphor was perfect. Beautiful.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
A sad poem. Well, at least you can write. I seem to have lost that talant at the moment. I really liked this, and could in a strange way relate. Some of the imagery was wonderful. Keep up the great work.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
Beautiful metaphor. I probably don't even need to bother saying that I can relate. Lovely job.
Night Silver's whisper chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
How gorgeous! I can't wait to get this onto my favorites! This is wonderful.

I love the flow of it, and how you conclude it. You have a good build up, and then a good middle, and considering you also ended it very well...I think you have a good poet's talent.

Night Silver's Whisper
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
I liked how you used one thing to represent so much. Nice job! )