|Reviews for You're Letting Her Die|
| fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
A scary thought, but realistic enough... S
| Jecori chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
very well written. the words are so powerful, and display the voice of uncommanding authority (if that makes sense). it's sad, and thinking before you speak is always happening to me. ugh. i never think. i mean, i'm not spitting out insults or put-downs, i just get myself into trouble all the time for back-talking, so that's how THAT applies to me. i just wanted to catch up on one error though: "She feds you the information" to "She fed you the information". again, nice job. keep writing!