Reviews for Now I'm Not So Sure
its.Nothing.Special chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
You've got a great poetic voice, a natural talent. It's wonderful to read. :DD

Another powerful use of repetition, but I agree with your other reviewer that this piece may have been better if it were longer. The breaks seemed a little choppy; I think I liked the repetition in your other poem because it was subtler.

Still a beautiful piece, and I adored the ending. You can feel the uncertainty of the speaker, and it was a great, if not depressing, way to end the poem. Once again, well done!

Keep writing!


shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
I think that the repitition was a good idea, but I think this piece would be better if it were longer. I say this because whenever I read a piece with repition in it, it has been a longer piece. I do think that I got the message of this passege clearly though, so nice job.