Reviews for Obsessed
XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
i feel like ive been reviewing almost all of your poems so im going to stop myself while im ahead. i liked this also. its so true and everyone can relate to it. there were some parts that i thought could have flowed better)is that the right word i kinda blanked out haha) but overall i liked it.
its.Nothing.Special chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Wow. Wow, I really enjoyed that. :DD

The repetition of "and it's funny" gave a sense of rhythm to the poem, alluding to the cycle of hate and obsession subtly.

One minor error I caught. [Yes, hatred is poisionus] 'Poisionus' should be 'poisonous.' ;)

Other than that, I loved it! It was something I could relate to, and very well-said.


tearing hands chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Powerful and scarily true- hatred becomes obsession much more easily than love. Good job.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
There's so much truth here. Hating things/people is unhealthy but we just go on doing it anyway. Great job and keep writing.