wow! i love dragons, and they are featured in my story, called When Darkness Falls. I loved the way you captured the hunt and the flying...beautiful! Keep it up!

Okay, first off, one thing that confused me a little was the first line. Why is As capitalized? I don't understand that and it's a bit confusing...

I thought the second line rhyming thing was good. I really liked that.

Overall it was a very good poem and I liked it. D

I can just imagine the scenes with these words.

Other than that, it's a lovely piece 3

Great! I love the poem. I know constructive crityicism is in high demand, but I have none to offer. It was really nice. Thank you for the spelendid poem!

An excellent, sweet flowing piece this. The rhyme scheme is one I love and wish I could use more often. The topic is also brilliant (dont we all love Dragons). Only nag was this one line "With Diamonds of cloud dew crusting their faces" I think it knocked the rhythm a bit, maybe it should be cut down a little.

Other than that though as I said before, excellent work!