|Reviews for Dragon Home|
| the ticking clock chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
wow! i love dragons, and they are featured in my story, called When Darkness Falls. I loved the way you captured the hunt and the flying...beautiful! Keep it up!
| Azena Kira chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Okay, first off, one thing that confused me a little was the first line. Why is As capitalized? I don't understand that and it's a bit confusing...
I thought the second line rhyming thing was good. I really liked that.
Overall it was a very good poem and I liked it. D
| Dark Kaze Ryuu chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
I can just imagine the scenes with these words.
Other than that, it's a lovely piece 3
| HIme1221 chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Great! I love the poem. I know constructive crityicism is in high demand, but I have none to offer. It was really nice. Thank you for the spelendid poem!
| Dante's Disciple chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
An excellent, sweet flowing piece this. The rhyme scheme is one I love and wish I could use more often. The topic is also brilliant (dont we all love Dragons). Only nag was this one line "With Diamonds of cloud dew crusting their faces" I think it knocked the rhythm a bit, maybe it should be cut down a little.
Other than that though as I said before, excellent work!