Reviews for Betrayal
tearing hands chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
I don't think I've ever read a poem in this kind of style before, and I really loved it. It took me a little bit to get used to it, but I really, really loved the descriptions and the style and the whole poem, so much that now I'm going to have to add it to my favorites. Good job!
changed.by.an.afterthought chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
this poem is wodnerful. i love the imagery and desciriptions in it. very dark and moving. 'then...you shattered into an infinite number of glass shards when i saw u that night...' its perfect seperated from everything else...i love it.

- Changed