Reviews for Marble
gold against the soul chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Don't ask me how, but even if I hadn't read your profile, I would sense from this piece that you lived in London - or some other big, cosmopolitan city! There's a sense of movement, space and loneliness which is really beautiful. I love the line 'She steals the wind, wide eyed' - it's simple but pure gold.

Thanks for your review,

gold against the soul
Iris Early chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
speaks to me more than i'd like it to.

it's beautiful darling.

'she steals the wind'


talent pretty much oozes from your fingertips - however bitten your diddy nails are.

Bonjour Skitty chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
It's been awhile since you've written anything. I'm quite impressed. _

The descriptions seem a bit abstract and random, but for some reason, I find great poetic beauty in it.. it seems omnious in some sense, which greatly appeals to me.

~ Much love,

Bleached Roses