|Reviews for over your head and under my radar|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
| this is britt chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
THOSE LAST TWO LINES. this seems like it'd make for a good spoken word piece. nice job.
| WriterofRights chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Beautiful, reflective analysis of a temporary, shallow world...or at least, I think it is. That's what I picked up, anyway. Very deep poem with superb wording throughout. Your descriptions are amazing! Well done!
| a.breathing.spot chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Amazing is all I can really say, when i read the description i wasn't too sure if i would enjoy it because I feared it would be actually be a cheesy mashed together rant but this is wonderfully done.
Amazing once again