|Reviews for Voice Box|
| menima chapter 34 . 2/19/2014
I just read this in one night (stayed up till 4:30am XD ) And I loved it. Its a shame that it seems to be discontinued...Its such a nice story! To Anyone that is wondering if they should read it as it seems to be incomplete; I suggest you do. As I dont regret only getting two hours sleep cause I couldnt put this down :p
I love Nigel and Tae! They're so adorable and I want them to read about them more Please continue this story! More Tae/Nigel moments wanted :'(
| Lia Nobel chapter 3 . 7/28/2013
Bbbut I LIKE long chapters! ; v ;
| Lia Nobel chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
| N chapter 34 . 3/19/2013
I cannot express my love for this story. It was just perfect and I loved every moment. I really came to know your diverse characters and I loved every twist and turn the story took. I was so sad that there hadn't been an update in years. I hope you don't give up with story and pleaaaase update soon! I beg you!
| YilmasRegin chapter 34 . 2/3/2013
After reading this whole story in one long strech. I've got to admit that it is very addictive, and now that I've gotten to the end of it. It just really leaves an empty feeling.
The actions between Aillen and Nigel in part 1, felt so real and warm. And yet when it was time for them to part ways, you made it feel real yet again.
Tae being introduced in part 2, the new romance, the escape for a real life for Nigel. Aillen blaiming himself, for something that was right to do, but in the wrong way.
Nigel's selfdestructive path in part 3.
Tae coming back to Nigel, Claire being apart of Aillen.
Even though this story is most likely based on fiction (based on your author's notes), it still feels as if this very well could have been a true real-life story.
The very first chapter, that could be seen as the epilogue - even though it most likely is the prolouge - feels complete out of place. As it have nothing to do with the story itself. We need closure! We need to know if it is Nigel, Claire or some third person that lies in room 206 of that hospital. (We, being the readers and I would like to say you, the author, as well...)
I really wan't to know how this story ends. It is captivating to say the least.
If you (the author) simply cant figure out where to go, atleast give us closure by implementing the "epilogue" into the story. And then mark the story as "Discontinued"...
Now as my ratings dosn't have any implications in the real world, I still feel that I should give them to you. These ratings are personal and is based on reading half the public library in my town 70% of Fictionpress.
I give this story the following ratings:
Character development: 9/10
Written Language: 8,5/10
Making this story enter the top 5 m/m,m/f on Fictionpress.
| Necokris chapter 34 . 12/12/2012
Wow, really, WOW! Out of most of the stories I've read I can usually depict who ends up with who (but they have good plots) and It isn't nearly as bewitching or so cleverly strategized as this one! It's filled with so much confusion, heart breaks, mistakes, 1 time happiness but the future really isn't that clear. It is so mystifying it's...just undiscrible.
Though will Aillen and Nigel meet? I wonder if those fragile safe guard will come crumbling loose!
Awaiting your next chapter!
| Stahlut chapter 34 . 7/6/2012
Okay I know that this has not been updated for a while, but I really really enjoyed reading this story. This chapter was great, because of course the main characters always need to have some boy love, and especially Aillen, he needs it more than anyone. Anyway I hope that you continue to write more, cause I am guessing there will be more to come...I'll beg if I have to!
| d25gem chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Lol! "writer's diarrhea". And this doesn't have enough reviews considering how many chapters there are.
| moonlightshadow97 chapter 34 . 12/26/2011
i adore this story! i have to know what happens next! pleassseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update sooon!
| James Hiwatari chapter 34 . 12/13/2011
Well, you are doing better than me on updates...
(Though I was suffering from lack of time rather than writer's bloc, but still...)
Poor Aillen is suffering with all the social expectations. It can't end well...
It's nice to see you're back. The chapter is not too bad, but there were some odd phrasings here and there. You make me wonder what is the next tragedy to strike their lives (because surely it's setting up for something big, epic, and probably tear-jerking...)
| lunasea chapter 34 . 12/5/2011
i loved it. and i believe you should continue on with it..pretty please? you're amazing
| JtheChosen1 chapter 34 . 10/14/2011
So glad you're alive and writing! This was a great chapter here - I look forward to more angst and drama!
| akira017 chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
| Rosieroo chapter 33 . 1/28/2010
i love this story... please don't stop ...
| Jak Refynae chapter 33 . 1/26/2010
Yay! Finally! Well besides a few typos, lol, it looks like you're back in the swing a bit! And the story seems to be progressing as well! :D