Reviews for Mountain Dew and Gatorade
IdeasInTheAir chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
Humorous! Clever, really. I like how youput the flavours in brakets. () These things, I'm sorry I can't spell.)

PS: Thanks for your review; I'm glad you liked it. I also have met but a few other people with the name Danielle. I always fond it interesting to hear from other people who have the same name. Apparently it means 'graceful'. It doesn't really apply to me, though.)

Thanks again! And I've read a few of your things; they're all really good. You're a very good poet!

Tytherpol chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
i like it.

it's clever and short and nice.

:) respects, -ty.
aKa MiLeZ chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Resilient chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
This piece could be the epitaph of many lives. Love your style! Fun but powerful.
concerto49 chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
I never realized how drinks could get this far.

Ha, was that something that really happened? Apparently a lot of things don't mix - but I don't see an official list so it's probably an experience thing.

I liked how you finished with a rather strong conclusion.