Reviews for Beautifully Broken
phantom66 chapter 1 . 9/26/2007
beautiful work!
Professional Dreamer chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
Ripped lace promises...what a beautiful visual image... And I love the italicised promises, nice touch.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
I like the rhyming in this. It's easy flow contrasts cooly with the harsh reality it talks about. Nice job. :)

theatrical rhapsodies chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Wow, i got goose bumps. This poem flows so well, and you can just tell how horrifyingly weak, and heart broken the person in the poem is. Very nice piece.

-theatrical rhapsodies
Alwaysisnt4ever chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
This poem is so great.. i love the way you wrote it... keep writtin!


E. M. Burke chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Not too bad.. you have sense of well done rhythm but it would be nice to hear some unconvential words rhyming. Ones that are easy and you come by in poetry a dime a dozen. Along with the story..