Sounds like a good idea and interesting start.

yeah, uhm... those lyrics aren't yours. they're Skillet's. so saying they're yours (or not saying they aren't your's) is plagiarism. yeah.

Still interesting. Love the song lyrics. Keep it up!

Interesting. At first I was like, "Wow, ALL these people have a lot of issues..." and I thought it would be annoying. But then, I realized, "Wow! They ALL have issues!" It's like a written soap opera.

I can't wait to see how you put this all together!