|Reviews for Elliot|
| bmwmusicgirl chapter 10 . 8/26/2008
This is really interesting and written quite well. You might like to take a look at my story, The Life of a Killer. Please review if you have a chance.
| Once upon a smile chapter 8 . 8/18/2007
Oh no! They tell that to all of the girls to get the most out of them? When Ashley finds out... I would have thought it's best not to anger killers lol
| hail.the.bloocheese chapter 8 . 8/17/2007
wow, great chapters. they melt together wonderfully.
keep writing, lol. i'm addicted!
| Once upon a smile chapter 7 . 8/16/2007
I think this story is incredible. Each chapter just brings more to the characters. I want her to achieve what she wants so badly lol.
| hail.the.bloocheese chapter 5 . 8/11/2007
i like the pace of this story and how you incorporate her memories and the past.
i especially like how you keep reiterating her love for elliot. you're building the obsession wonderfully :)
| hail.the.bloocheese chapter 4 . 8/4/2007
i like the emotion in your chapters, you're really setting up her obsession nicely
update soon :)
| hail.the.bloocheese chapter 3 . 7/31/2007
i like how you add information slowly instead of dumping a bunch at a time. the buildup creates wonderful suspense. so yay! keep writing :)
| hail.the.bloocheese chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
great intro! i can't wait to read more...