Reviews for Proto Legend
Daisuke Yukimura chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed, but here it is! Honestly it was excellent for the first chapter it sort of dragged me in as I kept on reading, and for the most part great job, although I did catch one spelling error, but who cares for one spelling error right? Anyway can't wait for the next chapter, but I guess that's common for me when I read one of your stories...Oh yeah! One more thing I'll be sure to post the next chapter to my story ASAP so be sure to review, and I'll be sure to review your next chapter! Alright, bro?
KizunaIatari chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Wow, nice job man, I look forward to reading a lot more of your story, its getting interesting already, cant wait to see where it leads! Be sure to write more, and I'll review more, dont forget to review my story!
Utoro Takayama chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
Very well done, even for an old story. Well enough from me it seem that you'll get better in this story so will the story itself.