Reviews for Dear Boy chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
this is really good. The only thing i didn't love,

i thought you might have used the blocking system a little to sort of made me feel like i was reading a short narrative instead of a poem, but it was also very unique so i congratulate you one that.

other than that...i loved it, and i'm off to read another one.
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
are you going to give this to him? you should. or somethinglike it.