|Reviews for What a Perfect Disaster|
| Chelseamuffin chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
That. Was. Intense.
I love you, hun. Please don't hurt me?
Okay. So, I noticed a few minor typos, such as in the title: Disastor should be DisastER. And a few it'ses that should be itses. (Don't remember where.)
Aside from that, though, it's good. I never know how to comment on first chapters, but so far: For an unlucky person, Kris is pretty damn lucky. Two hot guys? Yum.
And they seem pretty nice. So yes. (What? I'm not entirely superficial, although the looks DO help...)
And, um. Well, I'll be frank: What happened at the beginning completely sucks for her, and I feel bad for her. Kris seems pretty damn cool, and I like her already. (You know it doesn't take much for me to become attached.)
Also, I like that it's first-person present tense. Most people go for past, and this is different. (I don't know why that impresses me, but we also know that Chelsea is easily impressed. So yes.)
And. Um. I'mma go now?
| Megan-TheWriter chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
Ah. So now I know the eluzive reason of why we are friends.
Anyway, I loved the thing about Italians...and Matt...ohlala.
One thing though, isn't it Disaster and not Disastor?
Other than that, good job, keep it up, update soon, yadda, yadda, blah, blah.
There. More than five words, not one of which was intense. Until now, but anyway.