Reviews for And I, Your Lonely Jester
Venz0r chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
I loved the first two and third to last lines the most. It evokes a certain, indescribable feeling.

I would've liked to see moar allusions to playing cards or something though haha
DNA Jefferson chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Wow that was great, i read it aloud to the tune of a Cradle of Filth song for some reason. Fantastic idea :)
BWeep chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
Wowzy...

Great poem. Can't describe it, but the feel of it is heh..wow.
Archaic Wrath chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
Ah, a very nice poem indeed. Great use of vocabulary and structure. You had quite a nice variation of sentence lengths as well. Good job.